Biggest mistake
theatrical_muse 341 words
Mar. 24th, 2007 11:54 pmName : Maggie Margaret Bethany-Francis
Fandom : Original Character
Word count : 341
Topic: What is the biggest mistake you've made in a relationship?
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Taking a strange man up to her hotel room was not such a good idea some would say, but with youth, there is cocky arrogance. The guy was harmless, Maggie surmised as she glanced at him out of the corner of her eye at Steve, who seemed perfectly all right with their little rendezvous up to her hotel room. He didn’t seem to mind that a little more than a few days ago, she had been a Mrs. and not a Ms. . Her mother would have heart failure about the whole marriage and annulment business, but this, would flat out kill her. She snort giggled in amusement over the thought as she kicked off her shoes. Her mother was sturdier than she let on and was not as hard on the discipline as she pretended to be in front of the neighbors. As long as grades were kept up and no neighbors talked, her mother was happy to hear that Maggie did confession once a week, assuming the worst that she did was “think” about kissing a boy.
“So, what is your last name if it isn’t Whistler, Maggie?” Steve would start slow, but he would start now. She was either drunk or hard of hearing if she could not hear him cocking his gun.
“Oh, it’s Francis, and yours is what again,” Maggie asked, dropping her purse onto the bed. She had to try again, though her earlier attempts at getting a last name out of Steve were unsuccessful.
“It’s still just Steve.”
“Oh, right, right …say, what are you doing? What’s with the …?” Maggie had turned around to face Steve while her hands were fumbling to undo the clasp of her dress at the base of her neck. In front of her, the guy she knew as Steve was holding a gun straight at her.
Marriage, now that was a big relationship mistake. While taking this guy up to the hotel room was not of the same caliber, it sure was a hell of a fuck up on her part.
Tbc…
Fandom : Original Character
Word count : 341
Topic: What is the biggest mistake you've made in a relationship?
from here
Taking a strange man up to her hotel room was not such a good idea some would say, but with youth, there is cocky arrogance. The guy was harmless, Maggie surmised as she glanced at him out of the corner of her eye at Steve, who seemed perfectly all right with their little rendezvous up to her hotel room. He didn’t seem to mind that a little more than a few days ago, she had been a Mrs. and not a Ms. . Her mother would have heart failure about the whole marriage and annulment business, but this, would flat out kill her. She snort giggled in amusement over the thought as she kicked off her shoes. Her mother was sturdier than she let on and was not as hard on the discipline as she pretended to be in front of the neighbors. As long as grades were kept up and no neighbors talked, her mother was happy to hear that Maggie did confession once a week, assuming the worst that she did was “think” about kissing a boy.
“So, what is your last name if it isn’t Whistler, Maggie?” Steve would start slow, but he would start now. She was either drunk or hard of hearing if she could not hear him cocking his gun.
“Oh, it’s Francis, and yours is what again,” Maggie asked, dropping her purse onto the bed. She had to try again, though her earlier attempts at getting a last name out of Steve were unsuccessful.
“It’s still just Steve.”
“Oh, right, right …say, what are you doing? What’s with the …?” Maggie had turned around to face Steve while her hands were fumbling to undo the clasp of her dress at the base of her neck. In front of her, the guy she knew as Steve was holding a gun straight at her.
Marriage, now that was a big relationship mistake. While taking this guy up to the hotel room was not of the same caliber, it sure was a hell of a fuck up on her part.
Tbc…